Week 5B In-Class: Second Postcard Critique & Refined Site Sketches

Wednesday we had another class critique, this time for our second, or revised, iterations of postcards.  Some useful feedback I received on my ticket-themed post card included...

• Bottom two serif fonts don't work as well together on the post card as the script & sans-serif - too many fonts?
• Teetering between chocolate bar & ticket - pick a side
• Bump up texture
• Feels too plain

I also brought in my refined sketches for home & sub page, which I'll have to scan in when I have a few moments with the scanner.  I'm really liking this toggle menu, which will hide under the hamburger navicon in tablet and mobile views.