Week 5A In-Class: Postcard Critique

Monday in class we did a critique of the postcards we created for our event.  There were many critiques about my design.  Some things to change included...

• Make the texture more apparent
• Single building not really effective - Need rest of cityscape
• Dark tagline hard to read against dark background
• Reconsider secondary color - red may not be best pick
• Buildings theme doesn't really speak "chocolate" - consider other avenues: chocolate bar buildings, path made of chocolate, Willy Wonka theme, etc.

For the next class I'll be creating a second postcard to replace this one.  I'm thinking I really want to keep the vintage feel I wanted to work with with illustrations of Lititz's quaint buildings.